Or I can change it ’round.
I’ll probably be doing a little of the latter. I’ve been thinking about the beginning I posted yesterday, and based on some feedback (thank you, sweetie) and some thinking, I believe I’ve come up with a way to make the actual “science” in this work of science fiction a little bit clearer.
Thing is, I can’t just come out and explain it. There are two reasons for this. One, exposition can be so very boring. Two, one of my characters is doing the narration, so I can’t have him write or say something he normally wouldn’t.
If anybody else has any thoughts or comments on what I’ve got so far, I’d love to hear from you.
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